Art 341- Production Design: comps

Monday, February 22, 2010

Sheri Veges said...: The second one on the top totally works and the second row in the middle with the two swimmers I love as well. The bus wrap needs more color; February 23, 2010 at 9:19 AM
Anonymous said...: billboard 1 and 3 work the best for me, although when I look at billboard 1 and the placement of the colors I can't stop and think of the Jamaica flag, maybe you could re-arrange that. As for billboard 3 how does it look without lowering the opacity of the swimmer? I like the glow behind the logo. Good job. :); February 24, 2010 at 6:15 PM
Unknown said...: The design works wonderfully off your logo, which is good, shows versatility. I would like to see more images of athletes, like in bus wrap 4, I would try and play more with the lines and what you can do with them, maybe have a swimmer coming through them, or a runner breaking the five colored bands, I'm not sure what direction you want. The concept you have of multiples of the same athlete, like with the swimmer, can open great venues for your design.; February 27, 2010 at 7:26 PM

Sheri Veges
February 23, 2010 at 9:19 AM
The second one on the top totally works and the second row in the middle with the two swimmers I love as well. The bus wrap needs more color
Anonymous
February 24, 2010 at 6:15 PM
billboard 1 and 3 work the best for me, although when I look at billboard 1 and the placement of the colors I can't stop and think of the Jamaica flag, maybe you could re-arrange that. As for billboard 3 how does it look without lowering the opacity of the swimmer? I like the glow behind the logo. Good job. :)
Unknown
February 27, 2010 at 7:26 PM
The design works wonderfully off your logo, which is good, shows versatility. I would like to see more images of athletes, like in bus wrap 4, I would try and play more with the lines and what you can do with them, maybe have a swimmer coming through them, or a runner breaking the five colored bands, I'm not sure what direction you want. The concept you have of multiples of the same athlete, like with the swimmer, can open great venues for your design.